Imperative
.
Live into a day’s
tenderness:
its fullness
is the world.
.
The lake
blinks at the sky
holding the sun’s yolk
in her center.
.
She our earth yields
an owl’s call
against absence, allows
sweetbriar
on a grave.
.
By day the moon
refills itself with light
Be like that,
enough for yourself.
.
Substance, will:
Speak not of morning
.
But set a blue bowl
Of wet apples
On the plain brown table
of your heart.
lovely and delicate…”Substance will…speak not of morning”…beautiful…bkm
hey bkm– many thanks and will stop by next round…xxxj
thank you as ever; will drop by..xxj
Jenne,
This is lovely: the contrasts in color, the landscape you know so well, your hallmark imagery that plays out throughout the poem and sustains the sense of being present and alive.
I’m so pleased you decided to offer this for OneShotWednesday.
Thanks, M– I am in the throes of submission of mss, many contest deadlines tomorrow…xxxj
what a peaceful and comforting poem…you can have one of the apples if you would like…smiles. nice one shot!
Thank you, Brian! xJ
wow. beautiful imgery here, and the first verse was the best! 🙂 loved it..
Mine Is Here
Thanks, Leo– I will go there directly…xxj
Your poem is a painting with words, stated eloquently in short lines. Nice One Shot!
thanks, dustus– will stop by..xxj
I love the final stanza and think it could stand alone. It would be even stronger on its own, IMO.
possibly! thanks for feedback and will drop by next round..xj
Great word choices; simple and lovely. Nice One Shot!
Beautiful images and the artwork is an added treat. I’m grateful to be receiving these again.
Thanks a bunch as ever Gerry– glad you’re back; send me some of your work! xxxxj
But set a blue bowl
Of wet apples
On the plain brown table
of your heart.
Beautiful with a graceful flow…Fantastic One shot!
Thanks LA– will drop by on next round…xxxj
I love this. The theme of being filled or renewed.
Glad you shared with One Shot
Moon smiles 9after getting filled up)
Thanks a million– will be dropping by your place….xj
This has a simple elegance and haiku-like feel to it! A lovely piece of ekphrastic poetry 🙂
Thanks, sweet Patti– hope all’s well…buried in mss and deadlines; hope you’re having good and bountiful harvest! xxxj
stimulating poem And binding with briars our joys and desires. Hope your week goes well.
How did you do that– a link in comment box– how cool! sill stop by and thank you~! xxj