Shut Eye –
revised Aug 16
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So very late now, the resolute
crickets, in the hallways of the night
Next door, the nursing home residents are sleeping
In the sarcophagi of hospital beds
Night nurses peering in
Mothers for hire
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I am here at the desk, the long blueness
Of the August grass, stalling
The vulnerabilities of sleep-
3 a.m.
incarnate stillness of the very old,
the sweet breath
of children nearby.
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Dreaming, we came home
the long way,
Flying along the bridge over the river
A kid flashed in front of me on his bike:
My breath caught and he was gone
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Could someone play a lullabye
For we who mourn, the fading
Women could someone
Expedite the passage
of flesh to grass
.
Tonight ships carrying poppies
Pull in to Marseilles from Turkey:
Who takes delivery
Of the opium, distills it:
we would breath that pure sleep,
.
To a recording of crickets
Soft dogs nearby,
and poppies in bursts of red
On salt-eaten walls
.
Sailing out
Free of the claims of the body,
Mother-ship looming out of the mist
come in for the misbegotten.
I like the metaphor of the vessel at sea, coming for “the misbegotten”, to carry them to a place where dreams do not disturb. That image of “A kid in front of me on his bike”: instantly recognizable, heart-stopping.
Lines I particularly like: “the tenderness /Of crickets” (because it surprises), “the long blueness/Of the August grass” (so evocative of mood); “the vulnerabilities of sleep” (yes!), “passage of flesh to grass”.
Keeping writing. This is one reader who deeply appreciates your work.
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I loved the meandering spirit of this fine poem and especially like the line about crickets. I am fond of those critters … few agree with me.
Gerry