The Country of Shame
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Sunday, August. You write
To a worn CD of tenors in front of the Eiffel Tower.
You were there in spirit, remember/
You write comforted—old friends singing
Against depression’s undertow,
Failures strapped to your wrists like dead owls
On the midnight roadside.
.
You dive to dangerous depth, testing
Yourself to see how much
Grief is bearable. ,
Tears in a petrie dish; under the microscope
Each one refracting someone in mid-journey
Everything yes a journey, an odyssey across
Twenty-four hours, the hull of day, nothing
Sparring with you on the horizon,
The tall masts and transparent sails of nothing.
.
What shame has taken you hostage
Like a stowaway, someone illegitimate
Not worthy of being in the world
Labeled and dispossessed
Excluded, repudiated
.
Who inflicted you
With the fear of being,
Phobic toward your own
Wholeness,
The fear that you are not enough
For yourself, have nothing
To give to the world.
.
Critically burned, what could you do
but as you retreated, return fire, scorching
So many, congregated there in the cathedral
Of light,
On the perimeter, afraid
Of you:
.
Do you like this, this Sunday
Loneliness, when families
Take the air pushing their strollers
Ahead of them
.
If they knew of the vixen
Looking out from her scratched, grey
Window, waiting for nightfall
That a hawk banks over them,
Strands of fine blond hair in her talons
.
Live or die. Make up your mind.
Write, write hard and long
Write as CPR, breathing life
Into your own lungs,
Engrave the ragged, residual
testimonials left out in the rain,
Into your own heart.
You draw me into your pain with such powerful images; especially these lines.
Grief is bearable. ,
Tears in a petrie dish; under the microscope
Each one refracting someone in mid-journey
Gerry
Thank you, Gerry…xxxj
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“… testing / Yourself to see how much / grief is bearable…/ The fear that you are not enough… / have nothing / To give to the world….”
Such pain-filled lines issue from behind that “scratched, grey / Window”. I’ve looked in, though. I don’t see the “hawk…strands of fine blond hair in her talons” but one who hears the beauty in the voices of “old friends singing” and knows how to make beauty out of words from the heart.
Please write, “write hard and long”, write to come in from the rain.
thanks, Maureen. xxxj
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Stop! Stop living in my body! (wink)